in this lect., the prof. states 2 sources contributed to the name amazon for the river which is located in south america. first source is from the original native inhabitants, who lived close to the river ,and they called it amazon which means amazono,which means big wave. but this is not the...
topic development 2.5 ( you didn't make the 2nd point)
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children has... HAVE
think about what they... doing THEY ARE DOING
have to have responsible... RESPONSIBILITY