Our 250 word NYC midnight flash fiction challenge

Undaunted by our ignominious failure in the previous NYC midnight flash fiction competition, we once again put ourselves through the short story wringer and present our writing for all to see and to praise/laugh at/mock/experience as an epiphanical life changing moment (delete as appropriate). And as well as giving our honest, frank and uncompromising feedback on each other’s 250 word "masterpieces", we also wrap up our NaNoWriMo adventure and review some writing software while we’re at it. 

Find out more about NaNoWriMo here...
https://nanowrimo.org/

Scrivener here...
https://www.literatureandlatte.com/scrivener/overview

And the HG Wells story that Jon blatantly ripped off is here...
https://www.gutenberg.org/files/23218/23218-h/23218-h.htm

Music by Dano songs