Submission to Making Yourstory Round 2

By Mia, aged 6.

Reads: 'She went on her way and then she crossed the road, and then she went to the High Street and bought a paper. The she went to the school ...- but she didn't go inside. she waved to her best friend, Laura, who was playing inside with Tony. But she didn't go inside so she waved, and she walked away from the school gates and the she continued (but I don't know where)...'