The Only Color

over 5 years ago

jen_b

jen_b - over 5 years ago

Such a sad and familiar scene. You paint it really well. I feel so sorry for him.

pjkaiser

pjkaiser - over 5 years ago

David - I remember this story from your blog. I like it - its a very powerful statement about war. My only comment would be to slow down your delivery a bit and add a bit more emotion to the reading. You have a terrific voice, though :-)