The Only Color

Jul 04, 2010, 05:53 PM
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jen_b

jen_b - almost 7 years ago

Such a sad and familiar scene. You paint it really well. I feel so sorry for him.

pjkaiser

pjkaiser - almost 7 years ago

David - I remember this story from your blog. I like it - its a very powerful statement about war. My only comment would be to slow down your delivery a bit and add a bit more emotion to the reading. You have a terrific voice, though :-)